5 key points of the essay

The introduction is very clear and precise, it doesn’t waffle on about any irrelevant points and shows clearly what the essay is about.

Women are rising in status throughout the media down to the use of naked and explicit photos spread and images.

Good textual analysis and includes critical analysing the text using key concepts.

Media Theory is used throughout such as - Mulvey

"Modern magazine follow the conventions of Playboy, in which women are depicted as objects for men's contemplation and enjoyment".-use Sophisticated language and makes it flow.